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		<title>Five and Ten</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Mar 2010 21:35:44 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Wendy Sullivan</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I read two great posts earlier today.
Five Simple Ways to Increase the Reach of Your Blog
I love the points about social media and commenting, but I disagree with article marketing. I tried it, and it didn&#8217;t work for me. That said, I know there are a great many niche bloggers who have built up a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I read two great posts earlier today.</p>
<p><a href="http://remarkablogger.com/2010/03/22/5-simple-ways-to-increase-the-reach-of-your-blog/" target="_blank"><strong>Five Simple Ways to Increase the Reach of Your Blog</strong></a></p>
<p>I love the points about social media and commenting, but I disagree with article marketing. I tried it, and it didn&#8217;t work for me. That said, I know there are a great many niche bloggers who have built up a great deal of traffic and credibility with article marketing. Perhaps I&#8217;m not niche-y enough.</p>
<p><a href="http://writetodone.com/2010/03/23/10-quick-tips-for-concise-compelling-writing/" target="_blank"><strong>10 Quick Tips for Concise &amp; Compelling Writing</strong></a></p>
<p>The point about using short sentences is important. I read way more articles than I actually write, and short sentences and bullet points are appreciated. Reading from the web isn&#8217;t the same as reading from a book or magazine, and web writers should recognize that large blocks of text or run-on sentences can be discouraging to the reader.</p>
<p>Ok, back to the grindstone. Later!</p>
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		<title>OMG! A letter!</title>
		<link>http://girlonthewrite.com/2009/07/omg-a-letter/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Jul 2009 01:21:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Wendy Sullivan</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I faced a rather retro writing challenge today. I needed to write a letter. With like, a pen. And paper. To an 80 year old man.
So I dug out my dusty stationery that really doesn&#8217;t get used often enough, grabbed a pen, and then stared blankly at the page. Wow. To think, I used to [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://girlonthewrite.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/07/letters.jpg"><img class="alignleft size-full wp-image-319" style="border: 0pt none; margin: 6px;" title="letters" src="http://girlonthewrite.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/07/letters.jpg" alt="" width="214" height="301" /></a>I faced a rather retro writing challenge today. I needed to write a letter. With like, a pen. And paper. To an 80 year old man.</p>
<p>So I dug out my dusty stationery that really doesn&#8217;t get used often enough, grabbed a pen, and then stared blankly at the page. Wow. To think, I used to do this all the time. Seriously, I would write 5-10 letters every week when I was living far from home and before I had a computer and email.</p>
<p>When I think of the volumes of letters I&#8217;ve written &#8211; both sent and unsent &#8211; it shocks me that I&#8217;ve practically forgotten how.</p>
<p>Now a quick note to my landlady with the monthly rent check is pretty much all I can muster.</p>
<p>You know what really threw me for a loop though? I very nearly wrote &#8220;OMG&#8221; at the start of a sentence. Srsly. So accustomed am I to chatting, Twitter and texting that I almost used &#8220;OMG&#8221; in a letter to an 80-year-old man who has never owned a computer.</p>
<p>How embarrassing. What am I coming to? So I&#8217;ve decided I need to stretch some of these little-used writing muscles again. I need to stop being so lazy and computer-driven &#8211; it&#8217;s time to write a letter once in a while.</p>
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		<title>Will Write for Shoes</title>
		<link>http://girlonthewrite.com/2008/10/will-write-for-shoes/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Oct 2008 13:30:23 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Wendy Sullivan</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[NaNoWriMo]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[Chick lit. I decided I would write nice, pink, fluffy chick lit for this years NaNoWriMo. I like the genre &#8211; I always take it on vacation to Hawaii, because the flight is interminable and I like the light fare to help me through.
There is one problem though &#8211; I haven&#8217;t the slightest clue how [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Chick lit. I decided I would write nice, pink, fluffy chick lit for this years NaNoWriMo. I like the genre &#8211; I always take it on vacation to Hawaii, because the flight is interminable and I like the light fare to help me through.</p>
<p>There is one problem though &#8211; I haven&#8217;t the slightest clue how to write chick lit. One of the gals on the NaNo forums recommended a book called <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0017HWZM6?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=girlontherigh-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=B0017HWZM6">Will Write for Shoes: How to Write a Chick Lit Novel</a><img src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=girlontherigh-20&#038;l=as2&#038;o=1&#038;a=B0017HWZM6" width="1" height="1" border="0" alt="" style="border:none !important; margin:0px !important;" />, which I am absolutely going to pick up this week.</p>
<p>From the Table of Contents:</p>
<blockquote><p>Part II: Where Do I Sign Up? &#8211; How to Write a Chick Lit Novel<br />
Chapter 5:   What&#8217;s it All About? &#8211; Premise<br />
Chapter 6:   From Ducklings to Divas &#8211; Characters<br />
Chapter 7:   There&#8217;s a Story in Here Somewhere &#8211; Story<br />
Chapter 8:   Driving With a Map &#8211; Outlining<br />
Chapter 9:   Joyriding &#8211; Free-form Writing<br />
Chapter 10:   Underwire for Your Novel &#8211; Story Structure<br />
Chapter 11:   Whose Story Is This, Anyway? &#8211; Point of View<br />
Chapter 12:   Being You and Loving It &#8211; Voice<br />
Chapter 13:   Warning:   Period of Time When Your Life Will Necessarily Suck &#8211; Revisions</p></blockquote>
<p>It even goes into the whole query letter process, which I doubt I will need for a NaNo book, but you never know! And besides, for <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B001775KLO?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=girlontherigh-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=B001775KLO">these shoes</a><img src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=girlontherigh-20&#038;l=as2&#038;o=1&#038;a=B001775KLO" width="1" height="1" border="0" alt="" style="border:none !important; margin:0px !important;" /> I would consider doing all the necessary revisions!</p>
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		<title>That&#8217;s Just Not My Style, Man</title>
		<link>http://girlonthewrite.com/2008/10/thats-just-not-my-style-man/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 13 Oct 2008 21:42:37 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Wendy Sullivan</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[What&#8217;s your style? I don&#8217;t mean what you wear, I mean how you write. Every writer has their own voice that&#8217;s just perfect for what they want to write about.
But what if you&#8217;re writing for someone else? As a freelancer, you are representing a client who may have a different voice in mind. You have [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What&#8217;s your style? I don&#8217;t mean what you wear, I mean how you write. Every writer has their own voice that&#8217;s just perfect for what they want to write about.</p>
<p>But what if you&#8217;re writing for someone else? As a freelancer, you are representing a client who may have a different voice in mind. You have to adjust your style to meet their needs.</p>
<p>&#8220;That&#8217;s fascist, man! I&#8217;m an artist!&#8221;</p>
<p>Ok, but do you want to be an <em>employed</em> artist? Yes? Then shutup and learn to take criticism. Learn to work toward filling your clients&#8217; needs, before they find less of an <em>artist</em> and more of a <em>writer</em>. You&#8217;ve heard it before, and it is never so true as during a weak economy: <em>You can&#8217;t sell what no one wants to buy.</em></p>
<p>I will admit, there are some jobs I don&#8217;t apply for because I don&#8217;t feel there&#8217;s any way I could do them justice because of my style, tone or beliefs. I leave those jobs behind for a more qualified person. The idea of my writing about green technologies and veganism is highly unlikely, as I hop in the pickup to go get a steak. Nor could I write coherently about radical left-wing feminism from a positive viewpoint. If I can&#8217;t bear to read it, I can&#8217;t bear to write it.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s not the same thing as tweaking your voice for an existing client. For example, a client today asked if I could write more like the writers of another large publication. I had to clarify that she didn&#8217;t mean content-wise; she just meant style. No problem! I can make myself familiar with their way of doing things in order to better emulate their voice.</p>
<p>After all, if I want to write in my own style, that&#8217;s what I have my own website for.</p>
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